An Empress and the Warriors (江山美人 / Jiang shan mei ren) (2008) Imdb

Now this is looking much much better. If you could get the punctuation at the end of sentences right (and use ! instead of |) it would be even better. Make sure you only let lines begin with capital letters when it's the beginning of a new sentence, that makes it easier to understand the meaning.

Apart from those minor things: well done. Good job.

Job very well done,

Thank You !

 Much, much better indeed! :-)

These subtitles are very well done, in any language it is always the little things that leave the impression in a big way. Thanks so much.